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Pulchritude by petits-bonheurs

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Hello, :wave: I'm here to write a critique for :iconfeedbackfrenzy: contest!

This is a lovely picture that captures the bee's quest for pollen. The colours are really nice, the violet and green work well together and the bee's yellow is the spot of colour to balance the colour range.
I think you placed the bee too central. I know sometimes it's not easy chosing the right angle, as bees are quick (and sometimes scary), maybe you could try cropping?!
The diagonal lines formed by strains make a good visual effect. Also the light touching the bee and one of the flowers creates depth. Another thing creating it, is the lovely bokeh you have in the background.

This was my opinion as an amateur photographer, please don't feel offended. Keep up the good work!
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petits-bonheurs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much for your critique!!! It means a lot and I'll try not to make the bee so central next time. This was really just a chance shot, I'm shocked that I got it at all! :P I appreciate all the positive stuff you had to say, as well. Thank you again!
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AdrianaFilip Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
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